Is it wrong that I dreamt about smacking my teammate last night?

He offered to write the first draft of our paper. Having read it, I REALLY want to know how this fucker got through his undergrad, much less accepted into both an MBA and a Law program.  Feel free to read this pure crap:

In order to research and identify possible gaps in the community, Team 5 went on three different excursions.   During our first excursion we went downtown and noticed the inadequate parking situation that downtown Denver provides.  During our second excursion we went out late at night interviewing bar patrons about their transportation plans to get home.   Our last excursion took us back downtown into the downtown area distributing a questionnaire to really narrow down the gap.    

Our first excursion took us to downtown Denver via the light rail in search of a gap.  While walking down the 16th Street Mall we noticed many social issues that existed, but seemed well beyond our reach.  We witnessed examples of poverty, homelessness, and littering.   During this excursion we took notes of all the issues we witnessed.  Upon further discussion and research of these issues we were unable to find an effective way to resolve the identified community gaps.  Since our group has a strong inclination to pick a community gap that had a significant chance of being executed we decided to continue our search.

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PS- Yes, I understand that I do not have the best English skills in the world while posting on a blog, such as this.  A school paper should have great care taken, though.